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Did you know that you, as a writer, get your own toolbox? That's right! It doesn’t even matter how badly you fouled up that sliding bookshelf you tried to make last year in wood shop!
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Writer's Toolbox, a la Shmoop.
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It is said that once there was a young man with writer's block...
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...who would lose his home unless he could come up with a book of strange and wonderful stories.
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So the writer headed out in search of tools to make his tales more interesting.
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He met a storyteller who knew all the tricks of the trade,
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and she promised to fill his cart with tools called literary devices...
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Hi, I'm Scheherazade! I know how to make stories interesting, because
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I write tales to get all the town's landlords off people's backs!
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Sheesh, have these guys never heard of cold, hard cash?
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A symbol is a small thing used to represent a big thing, or a concrete thing used to represent
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an abstract thing. Symbols are loaded with meaning. Hide 'em in your writing like you're
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setting up an Easter egg hunt.
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A window can be more than a window. It can symbolize inside versus outside,
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freedom versus enclosure, and public versus private.
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Speaking of inside and outside...
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Stories need to take place somewhere, right?
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There's a device for that... called setting.
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We use stuff like era, geography, seasons, and living spaces to set the mood and add
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context to stories. Then, we get to decide what our characters do in the spaces we provide
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for them. Since we're the creators of these elaborate
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worlds, another thing we get to do is give shout-outs to other works of literature if
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we feel like it.
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We can use allusion to refer to someone else's creation—and not just other works of literature.
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Writers can also allude to stuff like TV shows, songs, and famous paintings by including ideas
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from them, their names, or even specific lines from these other works in their own writing.
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Of course, at some point, we have to be able to describe all the stuff we're trying to say.
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A simile is a figure of speech that compares one thing to another using "like" or "as."
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Ever heard the phrase tough as nails?
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Simile alert.
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Metaphors are like similes, but without the "like" or "as."
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Metaphors are magical because they turn one thing into another thing.
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Take the phrase "the golden hammer."
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The golden hammer isn't really made of gold; it just means "the right tool for the job."
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Similes and metaphors surprise readers...especially when they come right up behind them...
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and offer new ways of thinking about everyday things.
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Another way to add magic to descriptions is through sound devices.
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The first sound device I'll show you is what fancy poets like to call perfect rhyme.
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Paint and faint.
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Similar-sounding words and all that. But let's take a look at a couple other
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ways to split verse... Scheherazade Sells Several Screwdrivers.
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That's alliteration, which is when all the words in a
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phrase start with the same consonant sound.
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Okay, now how do we put it all together?
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Well, to start, we can choose our words carefully.
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Thanks to a device called diction, the toilet can be the can... or the throne.
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Diction is just word choice and the effect it has. It's a great device for tweaking tone
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and saying it like ya mean it. Syntax is the way words and phrases relate
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to one another. We use syntax to organize our sentences.
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Syntax is like an enormous set of fridge poetry...
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... It lets us run wild with meaning and creativity...
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Well, within the limits of proper grammar anyway.
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Ready for the final purchase? Irony.
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Irony is when the actual meaning contradicts the figurative meaning.
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Writers can use a nifty device called situational irony, which is a way of showing rather than
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telling what happens when life seems to contradict itself.
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Wouldn't it have been ironic...
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if our writer had been trained to use all these devices only to find out it was too late?
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The writer, unblocked and pleased with his purchases,
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toiled the night away with his new tools.
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When the morning came, the landlord was pleased with the writer's creations.
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So, he treated him to one thousand and one more days on his lease.
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