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Okay morty s i shmoop e writing for you here

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Here's the sentence Frida kahlo began and ended her life

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in mexico city Comma her home was known as the

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blue house right there's clearly a problem here Well frida

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kahlo was a fantastic artist so let's show her some

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respect and write about her as grammatically correctly as possible

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We can split this piece into two sentences with nothing

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but a period and some smart capitalizations age should be

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be there again in her life in mexico city period

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her home was known as the blue house Well we

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don't want to leave This sentence is it is because

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putting an independent claws on either side of a comic

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creates a comma spice So what is out because doesn't

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work is a conjunction because what one idea doesn't provide

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an explanation for the other and neither does until because

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the ideas don't follow one another chronologically So that's it

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It's b her house is blue just like that gallon

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avatar and that's where it all came from Yeah really 00:01:06.265 --> [endTime] not kidding All right let's be were smoked

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