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Cause: You watch this video. Effect: You’ll be our best friend 4EVA. (We promise we don’t say that to everybody.)
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Cause and Effect, a la Shmoop. Just because one thing happens after another…[domino slips on banana peel]
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…doesn’t necessarily mean that the first thing caused the second.
- 00:21
Your friends keep trying to tell you that…
- 00:23
…but you refuse to stop intentionally spilling grape juice on the carpet until the Red Sox
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lose. On the other hand, if you spill grape juice [guy in living room watches tv with friends and spills juice]
- 00:32
on one of the actual Red Sox outfielders…
- 00:35
...then there may actually be some cause and effect at play. [guy spills juice on baseball player]
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Using cause and effect within an essay can be a great way to show how a situation has
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progressed…[businessman build sky scraper]
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…or regressed. [sky scraper gets torn down]
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By showing your reader how a war caused a depression…[military tank, people in line for the dole]
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…or how the shifting of plates at the Earth’s surface causes earthquakes…[globe switches pasta plates around on a table and loses an eye]
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…a reader can start to make connections they might not have made…
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… if all you had done is dump a bunch of random facts in their lap. [guy reading a book on the couch, words drop in lap]
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Examining cause and effect allows us to think outside the events themselves and contemplate
- 01:20
their context.
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However, be careful not to confuse causation with correlation.
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Just because two things are related…
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…it doesn’t mean that one caused the other.
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The last three times your Uncle Bertrand has come to visit…
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…there’s been a full moon. [Uncle Berty opens door with full moon outside]
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But unless Uncle Bertie is seeking shelter to avoid one of his… “episodes”…[Uncle turns into werewolf]
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…it’s probably just an odd coincidence. Cause and effect is only when one thing happens
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and a second thing happens as a direct result of the first thing.
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Like when your mom caught Uncle Bertrand going through the trash… so she sent him home.
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Or when Uncle Bertrand tore up the living room carpet… so your mom made him pay to
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get it fixed.
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Or when one of your neighbors dropped by and Uncle Bertrand barked ferociously at him…
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so your mom fit him with a choke collar. Hm. Maybe there is something to that whole
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“full moon” thing. [Uncle pees on fire hydrant]
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