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Writing: Modifiers and Passive Voice Drill, Problem 3. What is the best way to revise the underlined part of sentence 3?
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- 00:03
Here's an unshmoopy question you may find on your exam...
- 00:07
How should this sentence be changed, if at all?
- 00:10
Ginger won the dance competition almost.
- 00:14
And here are the potential answers: So... what is this question asking?
- 00:21
It's all about modifiers -- those words that threaten to totally change the meaning
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- 00:26
of a sentence if not handled correctly.
- 00:28
Generally, modifiers come next to the key thing that they are modifying. They're clingy
- 00:34
that way.
- 00:35
So in this case, almost comes right next door to competition.
- 00:39
So... uh... what's 'almost competition'? Suppliers bidding for government contracts?
- 00:45
Coke vs Pepsi?
- 00:48
What'd Ginger ALMOST do? Well, she ALMOST won. She came in second -- that darned corrupt
- 00:55
Bulgarian judge at work again.
- 00:57
So Ginger ALMOST won the dance competition.
- 01:01
Our answer is A, as in "Almost."
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